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2026-08-28

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You are a hostile attribution judge for the novel at redacted. You have full repository access. Do not edit anything.

Your job is to score the dialogue of chapters/019-a-question-of-rosters.md on the project's own two instruments, defined in notes/dialogue-voices.md. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted.md, and the "How they talk" bullets for redacted, redacted and redacted in notes/canon/characters/minor.md. You are canon-literate and you are meant to be hostile: do not give credit you cannot justify.

Sample

Every spoken line in chapter 019, by these five speakers only: redacted, redacted, redacted, redacted, Edwin. Ignore Peri's few lines. Extract them yourself from the chapter. Number them.

Instrument 1 — PROP-COVER

Mask, in every line: possessives, proper nouns (people, houses, places), tool names, coin and money terms, month names and dates, and any piece of subject expertise that identifies a speaker by what they know rather than by how they talk. Replace each with a neutral placeholder.

Then, for each masked line, ask: can this line still be placed with its correct speaker, on grammar and construction alone? Count how many still place.

Report: total lines, number that place, rate as a percentage. For every line that places, name the specific construction that did it (e.g. "the pile that runs out", "framing correction before answering", "refusal in procedure", "demands the form"). If a line places only because you already know the chapter, that does not count — say so and score it as failing.

Instrument 2 — SWAP TEST

Take three lines from each of the five speakers (Edwin, redacted, redacted, redacted, redacted) — fifteen lines. Put each in another named speaker's mouth. Ask: would a reader reject this as impossible from that speaker?

Report a table: speaker, how many of their three were rejected, out of three. Then a total out of fifteen.

Then — and this is the most important part of your job — split those rejections into two categories:

Give both counts out of fifteen. The voice-alone figure is the real result and I need it to be strict. When in doubt, classify a rejection as standing rather than voice.

Also report

Be candid and be exact. Your final message should be the full scored report — the numbered masked lines with verdicts, both instruments' tables, the standing/voice split, and the two extra observations. Nothing else.

I'll start by reading the required files.

10 tool calls

🔧 Read notes/dialogue-voices.md

✅ 1066 lines, 69877 chars

🔧 Read chapters/019-a-question-of-rosters.md

✅ 200 lines, 22508 chars

🔧 Bash: sed -n '/Voice — binding/,/^## /p' notes/canon/characters/edwin.md | head -80; echo "====…

🔧 Bash: grep -n -i -A6 "How they talk" notes/canon/characters/minor.md

✅ 161 lines, 10010 chars

✅ 7 lines, 509 chars

🔧 Bash: cd redacted; sed -n '190,215p' notes/canon/characters/minor.md; echo ====; grep -n -B3…

✅ 28 lines, 1773 chars

Attribution report — chapter 019, "A Question of Rosters"

Sample: every spoken line by redacted, redacted, redacted, redacted, Edwin. 52 turns. redacted 18, Edwin 15, redacted 10, redacted 6, redacted 3. Peri's two lines excluded.

Masking convention: possessives, proper nouns, tool names, coin, months and dates, and subject expertise replaced by a type-preserving placeholder ([DATE], [FIG], [NAME]). Type-preserving is the convention this file already scores redacted's anchors under; it is generous to her and I have said so where it matters.

Instrument 1 — PROP-COVER

# Speaker Masked line Verdict
1 redacted "[FIG] on the books. [FIG]." fail. A bare-figure opener is Edwin's cheapest passport (§2.3); a bare count off a roster is redacted's. Places on nothing.
2 redacted "[FIG], of which [FIG] can be rostered for a delve. [FIG] was what I had in [MONTH] and [FIG] was what I had on [DATE]. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
3 redacted "It was true when I posted [DATE]." fail. First person + a date + what he did: that is redacted's attestation shape verbatim. Points at the wrong speaker.
4 redacted "It was." fail. Two words, no marker.
5 Edwin "Who told her twice?" fail. Short question; redacted's equally.
6 redacted "I did, once. [NAME] did the other." places — warrant as two nameable people who can be asked, one of them herself.
7 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose Which is true. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
8 Edwin "And now?" fail.
9 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
10 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted with me." fail. A request; anybody's.
11 Edwin "That's a cut. Somebody dug that." fail. With the ground-reading masked, a bare demonstrative ruling. redacted or redacted could carry it.
12 redacted "How long ago?" fail.
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
14 Edwin "It's alive. All of it's alive. That's not that." fail. Short units with the conclusion last is §6.1's Peri shape.
15 redacted "Then say what it is." fail. Bare imperative carrying no name, count, tool or ground (§2.5); "Then [X]" is Edwin's besides.
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted going [DIST] toward [PLACE] and joining redacted that runs behind [FIG] farms." fail, and it points the wrong way. This is redacted's rule 1 — a pile joined on with "and" until it runs out — in his mouth. No second balanced half.
17 Edwin "I can't get from [PLACE] to this pool. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
18 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose Every one. redacted sentence: unpublished prose It never touched a road." places — counts she took herself, assembled as rebuttal, doubled insistence, ends on repetition instead of a verdict.
19 redacted "Say it as a finding. redacted sentence: unpublished prose Flagged: her canon file quotes this exact line, so the construction and the evidence for it are the same sentence.
20 Edwin "It's not mine." places — copula plus possessive, three words. The single cleanest placement in the chapter.
21 redacted "I know whose it is. redacted sentence: unpublished prose Leak.
22 redacted "That's a change to [X]. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
23 redacted "Then write both." fail. §2.5 names this line by number as the proof that the bare imperative belongs to nobody.
24 redacted "You could have raised the rate." fail.
25 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose I'd have got it, too. They'd have paid it. redacted sentence: unpublished prose Weakly, and partly on an anaphoric triple, which is a device more than a voice.
26 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted's engine. What places it is that only he made that decision, which is content.
27 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose [TITLE], I've been at you since [MONTH]. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
28 redacted "Put both in." fail. Bare imperative, and a straight repeat of line 23's move.
29 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted's or Edwin's.
30 Edwin "It will." fail.
31 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose His file cites this line.
34 redacted "Send it to my house. redacted sentence: unpublished prose Places only on owning another house.
35 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted four lines later.
36 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
37 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose No other speaker here surrenders the last clause.
38 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted's shape.
39 redacted "It wants a guild letter." fail. Four words; the construction is redacted's in the two lines on either side.
40 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted does the same move at line 42 ("Start with those three"). A construction in two mouths attributes nothing (§2.7).
41 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose The counts were entered. The date was argued [FIG] times. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
42 redacted "What's the arrangement? redacted sentence: unpublished prose Start with those three." fail, and it points the wrong way. "What's the arrangement? Not the reasons." is quoted in minor.md as redacted's construction. This is redacted's marker in redacted's mouth, in a scene where redacted is present.
43 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose Nobody else in the chapter assigns.
44 Edwin "Agreed." fail.
45 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
46 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
47 Edwin "That's [METHOD]. It's mine. I've a whole speech." places — copula plus possessive twice, then the possession of an unused thing. Same machinery as 20.
48 redacted "She said. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
49 redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
50 Edwin "Did she." fail.
51 redacted "She's [AGE] and she's had a fortnight. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose Then get [NAME] in. redacted sentence: unpublished prose

Prop-cover: 22 of 52 = 42%.

Speaker Places Lines Rate
redacted 10 18 56%
Edwin 7 15 47%
redacted 2 6 33%
redacted 2 10 20%
redacted 1 3 33%

Two of the failures are worse than failures — line 16 (redacted's pile in Edwin's mouth) and line 42 (redacted's canon-quoted form-demand in redacted's mouth) place with the wrong speaker. Line 19's pass is circular: minor.md quotes that sentence as the evidence for the rule it passes on. Discount it and the honest figure is 21/52 = 40%.

For context, this sits at the top of the file's stated band — "about a half in an ordinary scene", and this is an uncapped five-hander with long speeches available, which is where a drafter hides.

Instrument 2 — SWAP TEST

Speaker Line swapped into Rejected? Ground
Edwin "It's not mine." → redacted no redacted could say it, of a finding not his.
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes voiceredacted never supplies a rationale for a document; he cites who gave him the entry. The absent-reader purpose-clause is a different mind, not a different job.
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted no redacted defers and owns limits comfortably.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes standing — the hands are hers to roster; redacted holds books, not a squad. Construction is available to him.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted no redacted is a warden and inherits from one.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes standing — she wasn't there. The additive count-pile itself is in redacted's mouth at line 38.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose Strip the office and the ruefulness is arguably his too.
redacted "Put both in." → anyone no redacted says the same move eight lines earlier.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes standing — his rate, his parish, his hands.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes standing — only the clerk enters. The procedural-refusal grammar would sit fine in her mouth; this is the closest call in the fifteen and I have given it to standing per your tie-break.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted no
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted "Say it as a finding. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted no redacted makes an almost identical demand at line 27. Live collision.
redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted yes voice — the metadiscursive frame announcing its own singularity is hers alone; redacted has no move that stands outside her own speech.
redacted "And I'll write separately that redacted doesn't want your charter…" → redacted yes standing — she cannot speak for another house.
Speaker Rejected
Edwin 1/3
redacted 2/3
redacted 2/3
redacted 1/3
redacted 2/3

Total rejected: 8/15.
Rejected on standing or fact: 6/15.
Rejected on VOICE ALONE: 2/15.

Two of fifteen. That is the round-4 band exactly (3/6 and 2/6 scaled), from a chapter whose attribution number is the best in the record. The 42% is largely a partition — and in this chapter the partition is institutional: the roster-holder, the guildmaster, the clerk, the visiting warden, the consultant. Take the offices away and six of the eight rejections evaporate. The two survivors are Edwin's absent-reader warrant and redacted's I-say-this-once frame.

Shared constructions in two mouths

Least distinguishable

redacted, decisively. 2 of 10 lines place with the props covered — the lowest rate of anyone with a real sample — and both of her swap rejections that hold are one voice rejection and one standing rejection. Her file gives her exactly one countable construction (demand the form; say it once and say you are saying it once) and this chapter spends it twice at lines 19 and 41, then writes her remaining eight lines in redacted's additive pile with future first-person clauses hung off it. Worse, her other canon construction — "What's the arrangement? Not the reasons." — is given to redacted at line 42, in a scene where redacted is sitting there. She is a warden-shaped hole with a good standing: a reader knows which lines are hers because she is the only person from the other house.

redacted is lower on raw rate but three lines is not a measurement, and the one line he gets (22) is his rule executed cleanly.