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Facts

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• Peri had no guild letter but was added to the roster anyway by redacted's decision. redacted sentence: unpublished prose with no letter"
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• redacted added Peri's name on "the twentieth." [stated] "redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
• Delve party composition: redacted, two of redacted, Charter's four, Peri, three more of redacted, Edwin, redacted — i.e., redacted + Charter (5 incl. Peri) + redacted (5) + redacted = 12 + Edwin. [stated] order given in text
• Warden redacted inspects boots/gear before a delve; bans anything that could catch (staff left behind). [stated] "The staff stays here."
• Walk from Charter house to the dungeon mouth takes "a little over two hours" along a peat causeway. [stated]
• Eleven days earlier, Edwin measured "a fan of flattened sedge" at the second cut; it has regrown halfway. [stated]
• Entry into Holm Deep: half past eight. [stated]
• Throat of the dungeon: twenty feet of dressed stone (ancient construction), then natural passage at cart-ramp angle; air moves outward constantly. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
• "Same as the fourteenth" — implies an earlier visit/check fourteen days prior with the same air reading. [implied]
• Standing rule in this hill: air-movement calls must be voiced, no penalty for false calls. [stated] redacted's speech
• First chamber: size of a tithe barn, cleared in two hours ten minutes; monsters called "redacted." [stated]
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• First chamber kill count: "a hundred and forty-odd." [stated]
• Nine ways on catalogued from first chamber — one more than "the book" records. [stated]
• Descent from first chamber: broken-stone slope with running water, four hundred yards long; Edwin estimates an 80-foot drop, redacted estimates 70 feet — the two disagree. [stated]
• Second chamber has ankle-deep water and an eighteen-inch-high tide mark, clean and new; redacted confirms it was dry as of "Weedmonth" (a named month). [stated]
• Second chamber has a submerged hole (drain) three feet across, water flowing into it — identified by Edwin as the sixth way on, "running the wrong way." [stated]
• Edwin can read walls/stone by touch for information (a farming/soil-sense skill applied underground) — explicitly a first-time application. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
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• redacted has its own dungeon, described as "a well one" (a known-reliable calibration site); Edwin is invited to visit it "in the spring" to test his hill-listening. [stated]
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• Formal log entry format for a delve: date, time, party count and composition, ways-on count per chamber, kill count, injuries — read/written by the warden (redacted) in a day book, dated "the twenty-first of Harvestmonth" (a named month). [stated]
• Dungeons "settle" after being walked to bottom: over about a month the surface monster-count returns to baseline and "the date resets," recurring annually; cause is unknown and has been unknown "since before there was a Charter." [stated]
• Second chamber refills partially on the way back up (not fully, not confirmed to be from the drain). [stated]
• Edwin injured: forearm broken (both bones, clean break, no skin broken), scalp tear above left ear, bruised/tender ribs. [stated]
• Injury occurred because the line shifted ten-to-twelve feet and Edwin, catching his footing on loose stone, was left fifteen feet from the line's near end, in the dark behind the lamp glare, beside an uncleared hole (chalked "five"). [stated]
• Edwin made three combat errors in the crisis: raised the lamp (blinding himself), stepped back to a wall redacted had explicitly forbidden, and cast his one battle spell aimed too high (spell hit at chest height; the threat was at knee height). [stated]
• Edwin then used his forearm to block and it broke; he went down; did not run. [stated]
• Peri broke drill to leave the line unprompted and killed the two creatures threatening Edwin, hand injured (palm opened) on the guard of her sword doing so. [stated]
• redacted logs Peri's drill violation in the day book, by name, aloud, in Peri's hearing; Peri does not contest it. [stated]
• Edwin criticizes Peri afterward ("You were told... redacted sentence: unpublished prose [stated]
• Peri receives a System notification: "Skill unlocked: Swordsmanship — Level 1." [stated] — first level in swordsmanship, occurring mid-delve while moving stone (not during combat)
• Peri states she has "had the sword since spring." [stated] — timeline anchor, spring predates this chapter (set in Harvestmonth/autumn)
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• Exit count confirmed thirteen down, thirteen up — no deaths, no one left behind. [stated]
• redacted was sent to the dungeon mouth at noon with a cart and two men, on redacted's order, unprompted by request. [stated] — establishes a named character "redacted" with authority to dispatch aid
• Final tally: 406 kills total for redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose [stated]
• Three injured total: redacted (knee, on the cart), Millbrook/Peri (left hand, needs "the bone-setter's needle"), and Moss. [stated]
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• redacted states she has "done fifty of them" (splinting forearm breaks), establishing her as an experienced field medic. [stated]

Questions

• What exactly happened "on the night of redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted") and Peri's earlier line-discipline failure reference — is this documented elsewhere, and does it match this chapter's implications?
• Why does Edwin's stone-listening ability work on farmland soil but is explicitly untested/unknown underground — what is the actual mechanism, and does canon establish limits on it?
• What is the source and rule-set of Edwin's single battle spell learned at eighteen — why only one, why never used since, and why did muscle memory retain it after centuries of disuse?
• Is the discrepancy between Edwin's and redacted's depth estimates (80 ft vs 70 ft) meaningful (different measurement methods, one of them wrong) or just texture — does either number get used later for something that needs to be exact?
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• Why does a dungeon "settle" after being cleared to bottom — recurring annually, count resets — and is this meant to stay a mystery or does a sealed answer already exist for it?
• What are "redacted," and are they a known/documented monster type with established stats, or a Holm-Deep-specific creature?
• How does the notification timing work — Peri's Swordsmanship level-up notification fires while calmly moving stone well after the fight, not during or immediately after the kills — is this consistent with how the System is established to fire elsewhere?
• What was actually said between Edwin and Peri "twice on the way up" that "one of them would have denied... anything had [been said]" — this is flagged as significant but left opaque; does it matter later?
• Who is redacted, and what is their relationship/authority to redacted and the Charter house (able to order a cart sent out)?
• Four prior written warnings to Peri about leaving the line "in her own hand" — what were the specific incidents, and where/when were they logged?
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• Is 406 kills for one delve (with a listed 140-odd + 11 + battle count) consistent with the individual chamber tallies given, or does it require unlisted additional kills elsewhere (e.g., in the second chamber both ways)?

Tensions

• The stated first-chamber kill count ("a hundred and forty-odd") plus the bottom chamber's eleven, plus the small numbers dispatched in the second chamber (twice) do not obviously sum to the final logged total of 406 — the chapter never itemizes enough to reconcile the total, leaving a fairly large unaccounted remainder (roughly 250+) implicitly attributed to the second chamber, which is described only in terms of a short "twenty minutes" fight and the two creatures at the end, not a count anywhere near that scale.
• Edwin and redacted give different depth estimates for the same descent (80 ft vs 70 ft) without resolution or acknowledgment of the discrepancy by either character.