2026-08-30
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Repo: redacted. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted), notes/canon/system.md (especially the Seal / cooldown convention, mana, skill levels, boxes), and notes/farming.md. Do NOT read anything under notes/sealed/.
redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished, 64-lamps-on-the-ground.md unpublished, 65-the-sluice-keepers-door.md unpublished, 66-the-fen-margin.md unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished, 68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished.
Report ONLY conflicts with canon or with real-world farming/weather/livestock fact: e.g. how a Deep vents, what redacted are, the redacted's stated effect and who may cast it and at what skill level, the Seal's cooldown convention and how a returning cooldown is displayed, mana exhaustion and recovery times, the flooding/sluice hatches, ewe wound care, mist formation physics (a working that keeps a north-east wind to prevent radiation fog over a fen — is what the scene says about mist meteorologically coherent?). For each finding: file, exact quoted sentence, one line on the problem, and a concrete replacement wording. No praise, no list of what passed. Return findings as your final message text; do not write files.
🔧 Bash: redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished draft/book-01/scenes/64-lamps-on-the-…
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Let me read the full dungeons.md and system.md files, plus the six draft scenes.
🔧 Read notes/canon/world/dungeons.md
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Findings — conflicts with canon and real-world fact only.
notes/canon/system.mdFile: draft/book-01/scenes/68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished, line 13:
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Scene 68 unpublished is set the morning/midday after the 13/14 Harvestmonth break (the ewe is found "at eleven in the morning," the day after Edwin emptied himself on the tower at 15:30–19:30 on the 13th). Edwin here forecasts having enough mana to cast by the night of the 15th — roughly 44 hours after emptying. redacted sentence: unpublished prose Not all. Not a quarter. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose
2. "A month" between parish-course spells contradicts the established "fortnight a spell" pace
File: draft/book-01/scenes/68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished, line 19:
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notes/canon/world/farm-teaching.md states, as Established-in-shape: "Lay-masterable and self-propagating... a fortnight a spell." Edwin's stated normal interval of a month is double the canonical pace.
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File: draft/book-01/scenes/68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished, line 59:
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notes/canon/world/dungeons.md establishes the scheduled delve of Holm Deep at 21 Harvestmonth (chs. 012, 019, 021). This scene is set on 14 Harvestmonth (the morning after the 13th/14th break). 21 − 14 = 7 days, not eighteen.
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File: draft/book-01/scenes/68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished, line 13:
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notes/canon/world/farm-teaching.md's table entry for the redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose
No other conflicts found: redacted and redacted are described identically to dungeons.md's established fauna entries; the partial-break casualty/loose-count figures (68 burnt, ~20 uncounted, "two hundred, might be four") match established numbers exactly; the Seal of the Loom cooldown and Peri's declining to use it match the established midnight-13th/14th-Harvestmonth timeline verbatim; the sluice-keeper's manual hatches are consistent with drainage being explicitly "kept unmagicked"; and the north-easterly steered wind used to suppress radiation fog (light, steady flow mixing the near-surface air and holding ground heat in) is meteorologically coherent as a fog-prevention mechanism.