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Findings for author's notes, chapters 001–012.
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Backwards. Starch clears from the core outward, so the last stain sits near the skin, not the core; a fully ripe apple is pale throughout. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
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Overstated by ~two orders of magnitude. ~1 g soil holds roughly 10^8–10^9 bacteria (up to ~10^10 all microbes); humans ever ≈ 1.2 × 10^11. The standard true version is "more than people alive on Earth" (8 × 10^9). redacted sentence: unpublished prose
Ch 005 — "That is where soil analysis comes from: fraud."
Overstated. Fertiliser/manure analysis and the agricultural experiment stations (e.g. Connecticut 1875; RASE consulting chemist Voelcker) did grow out of adulteration policing; soil analysis as such descends from Liebig/Davy-era chemistry. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
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Overstated. White/red clover are fussy: fail on acid soil (pH < ~5.8), waterlogged, very low phosphate/potash, and need rhizobia. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
Ch 010 — "starves in a matter of hours without them"
Slightly overstated; sources say 12–24 hours. Corrected: "starves within a day without them". "About half its own weight" — low end of range (sources 50–100%); acceptable.
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Causation backwards. Acre and furlong are medieval; Gunter chose 66 ft precisely so his chain fitted the existing furlong (1/10) and acre (10 sq chains). redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose "the year after somebody else decided the marsh needed a road" — the earlier Post Track is ~30 years older (c. 3838 BC), not one year; it reads as a joke, but if taken as fact it's wrong. Corrected: "a generation after somebody else decided the marsh needed a road". "Six thousand years" ≈ 5,800; fine.
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redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose "Hands hired" on quarter-days: hiring fairs were typically Michaelmas/Martinmas; close enough.
Ch 012 — "a fen hook" — not an attested regional pattern name (Lincolnshire, Norfolk etc. are); long-handled hooks/slashers are real. Fine as in-world naming; no change needed unless you want "a long fen hook".