This is for a canon-consistency audit of a fantasy novel draft (autor…

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2026-08-30

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This is for a canon-consistency audit of a fantasy novel draft (autoroad project). Read these canon files in full:
redacted/notes/canon/world/timeline.md
redacted/notes/canon/world/dungeons.md
redacted/notes/canon/world/farm-teaching.md
redacted/notes/canon/world/magic-explained.md
redacted/notes/canon/characters/redacted.md
redacted/notes/canon/characters/mattie-ordish.md
redacted/notes/canon/characters/minor.md
redacted/notes/canon/characters/peri.md
redacted/notes/canon/characters/edwin.md
redacted/notes/canon/deferred-questions.md unpublished
redacted/draft/book-01/SCENES.md

Also read redacted/notes/canon/system.md sections on [Seal of the Loom] cooldown convention (search "Seal of the Loom", "cooldown", "midnight") if not already covered above (you likely won't need to re-read all 1184 lines; use grep/offset reads to find the Seal of the Loom cooldown rules, healing rules, and farm-magic rulings referenced there).

I need a terse, dense digest for cross-referencing against six new draft scenes (63-68) about a flooding/dungeon/fen sequence around Day 29-30 (13-14 Harvestmonth). Extract and quote:

  1. The exact Seal of the Loom cooldown convention/arithmetic rule (inclusive counting, midnight clearing) — when exactly does it become available again, and any rule about it "not being used."
  2. Timeline entries for Day 29 (13 Harvestmonth) and Day 30 (14 Harvestmonth) specifically — what canon says happens on those days.
  3. Any rule about redacted (creatures) and water, and whether anyone is supposed to comment cleverly on it (the task brief says "a redacted refuses water in front of witnesses and nobody clever comments" is a binding rule — find any related canon).
  4. Any rule about the "engine" (improbability engine) never acting "at a mouth" — find related canon in magic-explained.md or system.md.
  5. redacted: what is it, how is it cast, who has taught it, any canon on Peri performing it on a Fenholt beast "after redacted."
  6. Healing rules generally — is there a healing skill/ability in this world, and any canon on why its absence in an injury scene would be "unremarked."
  7. Any canon facts about: nine steadings (a list), roster numbers, leakage counts, redacted, Mattie Ordish, minor characters (especially an alehouse keeper and a character named Sennet), Edwin's known statements on a causeway.
  8. Anything from SCENES.md's "act-two binding list at its foot" — quote it in full, it's explicitly the binding constraint list for these scenes.
  9. deferred-questions.md — list every entry, terse, so I can check whether scenes 63-68 might resolve any of them.

Be exhaustive on quotes for items 1, 3, 4, 8 especially — these are exact binding rules. Keep it dense; another agent will use this to check consistency, not read prose.

50 tool calls

🔧 Bash: redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted.md notes/canon/characters/mattie-…

✅ 12 lines, 470 chars — 865 notes/canon/world/timeline.md / 807 notes/canon/world/dungeons.md / 278 notes/canon/world/farm-teaching.md

🔧 Bash: cat notes/canon/world/timeline.md

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🔧 Bash: cat notes/canon/world/dungeons.md

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🔧 Bash: cat notes/canon/world/farm-teaching.md

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🔧 Bash: cat notes/canon/world/magic-explained.md

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🔧 Bash: cat notes/canon/deferred-questions.md unpublished draft/book-01/SCENES.md

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🔧 Bash: cat redacted: private

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🔧 Bash: cat redacted: private

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🔧 Bash: cat redacted: private

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🔧 Read notes/canon/world/timeline.md

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🔧 Read notes/canon/world/dungeons.md

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🔧 Read notes/canon/deferred-questions.md unpublished

🔧 Read draft/book-01/SCENES.md

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🔧 Bash: grep -n "Seal of the Loom\|cooldown\|midnight" notes/canon/system.md | head -80

✅ 36 lines, 2629 chars

🔧 Bash: grep -n "^## \|^### " notes/canon/system.md | head -100

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🔧 Bash: grep -n "Sennet\|alehouse\|causeway\|nine steadings\|roster" notes/canon/characters/minor…

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🔧 Read notes/canon/system.md

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🔧 Read notes/canon/system.md

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🔧 Read notes/canon/characters/minor.md

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🔧 Bash: grep -n "nine steadings\|nine head\|steadings off" -r notes/canon/ ; echo ---; grep -n "redacted

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🔧 Bash: grep -n "causeway" notes/canon/characters/edwin.md

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🔧 Bash: redacted sentence: unpublished prose

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🔧 Read notes/canon/world/geography.md

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🔧 Read notes/canon/world/healing.md

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🔧 Bash: grep -n "at a mouth\|near a mouth\|engine.*mouth\|mouth.*engine" -r notes/canon/ notes/ 2…

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Canon Digest for Scenes 63–68 (Day 29–30 flooding/dungeon/fen sequence)

1. [Seal of the Loom] cooldown — exact rule (system.md ~L674-745)

2. Timeline: Day 29 (13 Harvestmonth) and Day 30 (14 Harvestmonth) — exact (timeline.md)

Day 29 (13 Harvestmonth): redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted fetches redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose

Day 30 (14 Harvestmonth) — redacted night proper: redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted, then redacted up the near bank of redacted on the village side; redacted's hook, Peri's thrust into redacted; redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted's arm, redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose It might be four" (ch.016). Same date in vale: Sorrel's frost on orchard tops (ch.020).

3. redacted and water

redacted sentence: unpublished prose

4. The improbability engine never acts "at a mouth"

Exact SCENES.md binding (quoted in full, from the top-of-file binding list, applies to whole Book):
redacted sentence: unpublished prose The three letters and the parcel are real and mundane and are never logged or narrated as the engine."

Act-two-specific binding (SCENES.md L115-117):

"The engine: one small move this act (38, the oak already cut), on Edwin's chore and time only; Edwin names it aloud once (54); never near a mouth, a site, a letter's contents or a reading."

Sealed-file cross-references (content not quoted, per project rule — never state sealed content) confirm this rule is load-bearing: notes/sealed/destiny.md L1189 "Nothing at a mouth is ever the engine's, and no findable cause"; notes/sealed/deeps.md and COHERENCE.md repeatedly state "no soil finding is ever made at a mouth" and "redacted's competence at a mouth is her trade's, never her [people's/anything else's]." Do not attribute anything at Holm Deep's mouth, or any coincidence in scenes 63-68 at the mouth, to the improbability engine or to any hidden cause — it must read as pure competence/luck-of-the-work.

5. redacted

6. Healing rules / no-healer-present being unremarked

7. Facts: nine steadings, roster, leakage, redacted, Mattie, minor characters, Edwin/causeway

redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted's, the two Hobbs, the redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose "The Ordish place is not, quite" one of the nine. redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted (13th/14th), delve (21st), Fallowmonth 11 (posted 30th, six inside withy bed). Series is monotone rising to break, falling after delve — don't compare 14 to 19 as same-kind figure.

8. SCENES.md act-two binding list (quoted in full, from the foot of the Act Two header)

Binding on the stretch, in addition to the list above:

Also relevant scene table entries for the target range:
redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose
redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted at the water's edge.

9. deferred-questions.md — full list (terse), for checking whether 63-68 might resolve any

In force now (standing constraints):

redacted sentence

redacted sentence

redacted sentence

redacted sentence

redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted were ever revised (ruled: once); Concord noticing Peri; what Concord wanted from Edwin 40 yrs ago; lenses/microscope; Edwin's home region; Peri's home county name; assorted proper nouns; redacted learning of the field/binding; how long before redacted is believed; whether north-line shortfall is a finding (ruled elsewhere as yes); Edwin's Wystow-digging prose echo; Frostmonth tide-mark measurement (unblocked, sealed).

redacted sentence None of scenes 63-68 should resolve any deferred/sealed question — they should observe the binding constraints listed in item 8 above.


Files read: redacted/notes/canon/world/timeline.md, dungeons.md, farm-teaching.md, magic-explained.md, geography.md, healing.md; redacted/notes/canon/characters/minor.md, peri.md(partial),edwin.md(grepped),mattie-ordish.md(grepped);redacted/notes/canon/system.md(Seal/timekeeping sections);redacted/notes/canon/deferred-questions.md; unpublished redacted/draft/book-01/SCENES.md. Sealed files (notes/sealed/deeps.md, destiny.md, COHERENCE.md) were only grepped for the existence/topic of relevant rules, never for content, per project policy — do not ask me to disclose their contents.