2026-08-30
User:
You are doing a canon consistency check on the last five scenes of act two of the third draft of Book 1 of an original novel ("Autoroad", a LitRPG). This is a fiction-writing project at redacted. Do NOT read anything under notes/sealed/.
TARGET SCENES (the ones under review):
draft/book-01/scenes/85-do-not-delay-again.md unpublished
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draft/book-01/scenes/87-nothing-to-write.md unpublished
draft/book-01/scenes/88-ask-me-in-a-month.md unpublished
draft/book-01/scenes/89-the-road-south-east.md unpublishedFIRST read these canon/reference files in full:
- notes/canon/README.md (claim levels: Established/Working/Open questions)
- notes/canon/system.md (Wayfaring; [Letters]; the Seal cooldown convention; Peri's level curve)
- notes/canon/world/timeline.md
- notes/canon/world/silent-soil.md (the number chain; Sennet's grass; the whips; the protocol; the boy's sheet)
- notes/canon/characters/edwin.md (biography rulings: shed at nineteen/second year; walking stopped ~200 years ago; taught teachers in "half the kingdom"; never "six counties"; never his class name; no lifespan guarantee)
- notes/canon/characters/sorrel.md
- notes/canon/characters/mattie-ordish.md
- notes/canon/characters/minor.md
- notes/canon/characters/peri.md
- notes/canon/characters/ferrin.md
- notes/canon/deferred-questions.md unpublished
- draft/book-01/SCENES.md — especially the act-two binding list at its foot. Note these specific bindings to check against:
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- the Weave's robed man: Peri suspects Ferrin, is wrong, never mocked, nothing confirms either reading
- the knot lines
- Fate Magic stays at 2 this act
- "[Agent of Fate — Level 9.]" at scene 87 unpublished
- "ask me in a month" planted at scene 30
THEN read these earlier third-draft scenes for continuity context (NOT under review, but check the target scenes' back-references, dates, and figures against what these actually say):
draft/book-01/scenes/25 through 33, 38 through 43, 56, 57, 79 through 84 (exact filenames — use ls to find them in draft/book-01/scenes/)Also grep draft/book-01/scenes/ (scenes 01-24, act one) for "Marsh" to check the Marsh letter's wording if it's referenced in scenes 85-89.
Specifically verify:
- The chain arithmetic: 9 ch 73 unpublished on 29 Cornmonth → 10 ch 84 unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose
- Day/date correspondences: Day 42 = 26 Harvestmonth; Day 44 = 28 Harvestmonth; Day 46 = 30 Harvestmonth; Day 50 = 4 Fallowmonth
- The knot's day count on Day 42 and Day 46
- Wayfaring level twelve at the milk churn in scene 30
- The eleven times Peri wrote Ferrin down
- The damsons
- Sennet's "no" morning
- The stake letters
REPORT FORMAT (numbered, terse, no praise):
- Hard contradictions with Established/Working canon or earlier third-draft scenes — quote both lines, give a fix.
- Deferred questions resolved casually, or binding-list rules broken.
- Day/date errors.
- Sums/counts/distances that don't add up — show your arithmetic.
- New facts scenes 85-89 establish that canon does not yet record.
Report directly in your final message as text — do not write any files. Be terse and exhaustive; this is a consistency audit, not a review of prose quality.
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🔧 Bash: cat draft/book-01/SCENES.md
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted echo "--- silent-soil.md ---" cat notes/canon/world/silent-soil.md echo "--…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted grep -n "half the kingdom\|six counties\|two hundred years\|walking stopped…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted grep -n "deferred\|trigger" notes/canon/deferred-questions.md unpublished…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted sed -n '90,140,290,320p' notes/canon/characters/edwin.md echo "=== full con…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes ls | grep -E "^(25|26|27|28|29|30|31|32|33|38|39|40|41…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes grep -n "Seal\|cooldown\|day shorter\|days now\|for ne…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes grep -rn "Seven,\|Level 7\|Seal.*day shorter\|day shor…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes grep -n "Seven\b\|seven,\| 7 \|Agent of Fate" 5[8-9]-*…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes echo "--- scene 37 gate/no ---" grep -n "gate\|no\." 3…
🔧 Bash: cd redacted grep -rn "Marsh" draft/book-01/scenes/0*.md draft/book-01/scenes/1*.md 2>/d…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes cat 37-*.md
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes grep -n "ask me in a month\|month\." 30-*.md echo "---…
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🔧 Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes cat 30-twelve-miles-of-flat.md
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Sennet's-grass arithmetic self-contradicts within scene 86 unpublished.
Scene 86 unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted sentence: unpublished prose Four yards and two feet. Thirty-two days."
The actual subtraction: 16 yd 8 in (584 in) → 21 yd 1 ft (768 in) = 184 in = 5 yd 4 in, not "four yards and two feet" (168 in). Edwin's restated sum contradicts both Sennet's line immediately before it and his own "five yards and a bit" one sentence earlier, in a passage explicitly staged as him "not liking the first [sum]" and redoing it for accuracy. Fix: "Five yards and four inches," or drop the redundant second figure.
Seal-of-the-Loom cooldown drifts by one day across the act's class-level chain.
Anchors, all on-page:
Two levellings (7→8, 8→9) each claim to shorten the cooldown by a day off a base of 29 (post-Level-6), which arithmetically should land at 27 after three dings (29→28→27→26), but the explicit anchor at Level 9 is still 27 — one ding short. Either scene 87 unpublished's figure should read "Twenty-six," or one of scenes 69/78 needs to state explicitly that its ding did not touch the cooldown (contradicting "a day shorter again" at 78). As written, this is an internal sum error spanning scenes not all in the review set, but the review-set scene (87) is the one carrying the wrong terminal number.
Edwin's biography line breaks the citation it's meant to satisfy.
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[Agent of Fate — Level 9.] lands at scene 87 unpublished as required by the per-scene table; note the act-two "Binding on the stretch" prose paragraph in SCENES.md itself says "9 (scene 85 unpublished)," which conflicts with its own per-scene table (scene 87 unpublished) and with the task's own instruction (scene 87 unpublished). This is a pre-existing internal inconsistency in SCENES.md, not something scenes 85–89 introduced — flagging so it gets cleaned up, not attributing fault to the draft.redacted sentence: unpublished prose
Soft flag, low confidence: scene 87 unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose Scene 88 unpublished opens "Peri collected the debt that evening" and logs the knot as "46 d." If 88's "that evening" is meant as the same evening as 87, the knot figure should read 45, not 46. If a day quietly passed between the two scenes (plausible — SCENES.md gives scene 87 unpublished the range "45–46"), there's no error, but nothing in scene 88 unpublished's text signals the day-turn. Recommend an explicit anchor ("the next evening") if a day is meant to pass.
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