2026-08-30
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redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished
,64-lamps-on-the-ground.md unpublished,65-the-sluice-keepers-door.md unpublished,66-the-fen-margin.md unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished,68-it-buys-you-the-night.md unpublished. redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished anddraft/book-01/SCENES.md(the act-two binding list at its foot — note: healing's absence is unremarked; the Seal returns at midnight of Day 30 and is not used; a redacted refuses water in front of witnesses and nobody clever comments; Peri's farm magic includes the redacted on a Fenholt beast after redacted; the engine never acts at a mouth). Also read scenes 25–62 indraft/book-01/scenes/for continuity (not under review) — check every back-reference in 63–68 (the nine steadings list against scene 46 unpublished, the roster numbers against 45, the leakage counts, what Edwin said on the causeway in 62, what he taught in scenes 07–11 about the redacted if those scenes exist, the alehouse keeper's earlier lines, Sennet's earlier lines). Do NOT read anything undernotes/sealed/.Report: (1) hard contradictions with Established or Working canon or with earlier third-draft scenes, each with both lines quoted and a fix; (2) deferred questions the scenes resolve casually or binding-list rules they break; (3) day/date/hour errors (Day 29 = 13 Harvestmonth, Day 30 = 14 Harvestmonth); (4) sums, distances, counts, times that don't add up; (5) new facts the scenes establish that canon does not yet record. Numbered, terse, no praise.
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🔧 Agent: Extract facts from six new draft scenes
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🔧 Agent: Digest relevant canon facts
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🔧 Agent: Extract back-reference facts from scenes 25-62
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These three research agents are running in the background. I'll wait for their results before synthesizing the consistency report.
⚙ background task finished — Agent "Extract facts from six new draft scenes" finished
Noted — scene extraction complete. Waiting on the canon digest and the scenes 25-62 back-reference extraction before synthesizing.
⚙ background task finished — Agent "Extract back-reference facts from scenes 25-62" finished
Noted — back-reference extraction complete. Still waiting on the canon digest agent before synthesizing the full report.
⚙ background task finished — Agent "Digest relevant canon facts" finished
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Confirmed with direct quotes. Now I have everything needed for the final report.
1. Hard contradictions
SCENES.md/canon to record twelve miles and reconcile the healing.md "forty miles off" framing, which this scene is supposed to dramatize.2. Deferred questions resolved casually / binding-list breaks
SCENES.md line 84–86 cites "the redacted on a Fenholt beast after redacted (scene 66 unpublished)." The actual casting is in scene 68 unpublished; scene 66 unpublished only sets up the fen-margin fight and the Seal-back-at-midnight beat. Either the binding list's scene number is stale or the beat has moved. Flag for whoever reconciles SCENES.md against final numbering.3. Day/date/hour errors
timeline.md's Day 29/30 entries and matched exactly: redacted's arrival 14:20 (scene 63 unpublished "twenty past two"), church-tower working 15:30–19:30 (scene 64 unpublished "half past three" / "half past seven"), redacted's bell 18:00 (scene 64 unpublished "at six"), 290 ewes on the green 20:10 (scene 65 unpublished), full dark 19:40 (scene 66 unpublished "twenty to eight"), dogs at withy-bed post 23:25, second gate 23:52 ("eight minutes to midnight"), road held to 01:10, mist at 04:00 (scene 67 unpublished "as promised"), sluice-keeper found 09:00, noon count. "It's the thirteenth" (scene 63 unpublished) = Day 29 correctly.4. Sums, distances, counts, times that don't add up
timeline.md's dated delve entry before treating this as clean — I could not get a fully pinned citation for "delve (21st)"'s month in the time available.5. New facts scenes establish that canon does not yet record
world/geography.md.characters/minor.md under Mrs Tansy.characters/minor.md yet.timeline.md.redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished) are consistent with any earlier-established patrol dates — no canon reference to "the tenth" for causeway checks was found either confirming or denying this, so it reads as new, uncontradicted material rather than an error.