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2026-09-02

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Follow redacted: private Your batch (files under draft/book-01/author-notes/): 100-the-sending-book.md unpublished, 102-plot-fourteen.md unpublished, 104-ground-that-doesnt-answer.md unpublished, 106-presumed-sound.md unpublished, 108-under-a-stone.md unpublished, 110-the-seventieth-entry.md unpublished, 112-seen-and-not-read.md unpublished, 114-the-redacted-off.md, 116-a-foot-under.md unpublished, 118-nine-words.md unpublished.

I'll start by reading the brief.

16 tool calls

πŸ”§ Read redacted: private

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πŸ”§ Bash: cat .claude/skills/farming-check/SKILL.md && echo "=====FARMING" && cat notes/farming.md…

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πŸ”§ Bash: for f in 100-the-sending-book 102-plot-fourteen 104-ground-that-doesnt-answer 106-presume…

βœ… 42 lines, 12450 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: python3 -c " import json;d=json.load(open('publishing/chapters.json')) print(type(d)) pri…

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πŸ”§ Bash: python3 -c " import json;d=json.load(open('publishing/chapters.json')) for k,v in d.items…

βœ… 14 lines, 640 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes && ls | sed -n '99,119p'

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πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes && ls | tail -20

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πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes && ls | grep -E '^1[01][0-9]-'

βœ… 19 lines, 428 chars

Now let me read the scenes for these chapters.

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πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes && for f in 100-the-sending-book 101-of-this-college 1…

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πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/scenes && for f in 100 101 102 103 104 105; do echo "#####$f"…

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πŸ”§ Read redacted: private

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πŸ”§ Read redacted: private

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πŸ”§ Bash: for f in 100-the-sending-book 102-plot-fourteen 104-ground-that-doesnt-answer 106-presume…

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πŸ”§ Bash: grep -inE 'auger|fold|hurdle|day book|sump|drain|texture|blind|file.drawer|hiring|forecas…

βœ… 37 lines, 2589 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/author-notes && ls && echo "---" && grep -oih '^\*\*[^*]*\*\*…

βœ… 82 lines, 2088 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/author-notes && grep -lie 'blind' -e 'auger' -e 'hurdle' -e '…

βœ… 14 lines, 352 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/author-notes && grep -ine 'blind' -e 'auger' -e 'hurdle' -e '…

βœ… 7 lines, 5579 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/author-notes && grep -ine 'ewe' -e 'sheep' -e 'wind chill' -e…

βœ… 12 lines, 7530 chars

Now I'll apply the fixes.

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πŸ”§ Bash: cd redacted/draft/book-01/author-notes && python3 - <<'PY' import io,os def put(fn, te…

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πŸ”§ Bash: uv run tools/lint/prose_lint.py --scope note draft/book-01/author-notes/100-the-sending-b…

βœ… 4 lines, 162 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: grep -n -E '\b(nobody|somebody|anybody)\b' draft/book-01/author-notes/1{00,02,04,06,08,10…

βœ… 5 lines, 3979 chars

πŸ”§ Bash: python3 - <<'PY' import re d='draft/book-01/author-notes/' def sub(f,a,b): p=d+f; s=o…

βœ… 4 lines, 162 chars

Done. All ten notes checked against the scenes of their chapters (chapters 49-58 in publishing/chapters.json), against notes/farming.md rules 4-7, notes/author.md, and the existing note corpus for re-explanation. Lint: 0 errors on all ten (one corpus-level warn on indefinite-pronoun density, reduced from 30.1 to 17.2 per 10,000 words).

Per file:

Claims left deliberately soft (unchanged, already hedged or now hedged): the Wicked Bible survivor count ("about twenty are known"); "a good hurdler could turn out about ten in a day" (kept "as far as I can find out"); "the earliest properly blinded test I can find" (kept); the assertion that a good advisory leaflet was "four hundred words on one thing" is the persona's judgement rather than a measured fact and reads as such.

Autobiographical claims present in this batch (both new, both physically possible and consistent with notes/author.md; not yet in its log):

No git run, no scene, glossary, sealed or top-notes file touched.