Facts-only consistency check on three freshly drafted scenes in [redacted]…

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Facts-only consistency check complete for scenes 94-96. No files edited.

Findings

1. Weave-answer date is wrong (the flagged check). Scene 95 unpublished (draft/book-01/scenes/95-the-twelve-foot.md unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished redacted sentence: unpublished prose 013, 8 Harvestmonth, noon." Scene 95 unpublished is wrong on both the month (Cornmonth vs. Harvestmonth) and the day (13th vs. 8th).

   • Minimal fix: change "the thirteenth of Cornmonth" to "the eighth of Harvestmonth."

2. redacted's "did not speak" beat — timing compressed, possible soft mismatch. notes/canon/characters/minor.md:350-351 fixes redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished (line 39) has him answer Peri's very first question and then volunteer the shrinkage figure "a hundred yards later" — a much shorter span than "the first hour," and he isn't silent at the start. This may just be the source scene the canon line was drawn from (chs. 023/024 are exactly Days 53-54), in which case canon's "an hour" is the imprecise gloss and the draft is the ground truth — flagging for the author to reconcile rather than asserting an error either way.

3. redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished's redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose This is not a contradiction — the draft simply doesn't stage whatever "struck" refers to — but nothing in 94-96 confirms or dates it either. No fix needed; note for awareness only.

4. Everything else checked is consistent, including: 210 yards between chalk pegs; spoil/face-weathering description; water clarity and temperature; redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose redacted' ledger text; the bore protocol (hundred-yard spacing, 400 yd north line, plank/turf-line measurement, monthly on the eighth, copies to Wystow/Charter's dues drawer/redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose not a bedding plane"); the census astride the plank (two, then zero); redacted's man and the "nobody knows" answer with name underlined; Marsh, redacted, and redacted redacted sentence: unpublished prose 008/023 establishment). redacted sentence: unpublished prose I thought it would be cold" both read as permitted on-page reasoning/observation — no sealed-answer leak detected in either.

New facts (not yet in canon, worth a consistency-backfill pass):

• Marsh's private line to Edwin at his father's funeral 22 years back is now on-page as a concrete beat (content withheld by Marsh himself, not just summarized) — scene 94 unpublished.
• Marsh's directive to the secretary: "Pay him sixpence... redacted sentence: unpublished prose unpublished.
• Marsh's exact words granting redacted ground access and naming rights ("She may have the books. She may walk where she likes...") and his promise that his gatekeeper will use "Miss Millbrook" by dinner — scene 94 unpublished.
• redacted' full ledger quote as staged dialogue, and his response "Aye" to the request to be quoted at a college — scene 95 unpublished (aligns with minor.md's summary but is now the actual page text).
• The full protocol negotiation beat: redacted objecting that "a number that stopped at a boundary was no use" and Edwin's rebuttal — scene 95 unpublished (mechanism behind the already-summarized 400 yd boundary rule).
• Peri's private filing decision ("Twice is a thing. I don't know what thing. Middle column") tied explicitly to this Weave answer's second appearance — scene 95 unpublished.
• The census "departure from protocol" is now staged as Edwin's own explicit, named departure with reasoning on the record — scene 96 unpublished (matches the summary in silent-soil.md but adds the reasoning dialogue).